Jayce Posts: grammar

Jayce: I've gotta get the grammar done! Well, I have to blog some of it. Firstly, I have to write something about an embarrassing moment. Here goes!
An embarrassing (and funny) moment was when I took my first jump with a fourwheeler.
I was at my cousin Brandon's house, and I was (of course) riding their little yellow fourwheeler. Their fourwheeler is so little that your knees touch the front wheelwells. They also have a jump that has two sides coming up diagonally and goes down in the middle and then comes back up to go down the other side. So, I was going up the jump at about 10-15 mph. I knew I was going too fast because before I had been riding a bigger fourwheeler going that fast, and my front tires got air. So I COASTED up the hill and POW! I was in the air. Luckily, I didn't break the fourwheeler by landing in the depression, and landed on the other side. It. Hurt. Badly. Remember when I said my knees hit the wheelwells? When I jumped, my knees were pulled back; when I landed, they were forward, and WHAM! they hit the wheelwells. It hurt. Then, as I was driving down, the front rack fell off! So Brandon and I spent the next half-hour figuring how to put it back on. It is SOOOO funny when I think of it now.

200, 201, 202, 203, 204. ARGGGH! My paragrapgh was supposed to be 200 words max. Well, I don't think anyone will mind if it's 4 words over the limit. ;)

Now, about my swimming lessons (grammar required)

This year, my swimming lessons are hard. I have a new teacher, and I get SO tired from the workout I get. I thought it would be fun, but it was not. I must swim over 500 yards' worth each day. Each day's work goes like this:
"Let's do streches."
"I want you to swim freestyle across the pool and back. "
"Hold on to that buoy tight."
"Hold the top of the kickboard."
"We're doing a backstroke pull."
"Yes, we're doing freestyle across the pool and back 3 times; one at a time."
Not that I don't like my teacher. She's great, and gives me good exercise

100, 101, 102, 103. PERFECT!

Now, a Warriors update. . . and alert.
Update first.
Errors on Warriors book 2: Fire and Ice:

Greenflower; a RiverClan queen; is not listed in the alliegences

Oh, and I missed an error in Into the Wild:

Tigerclaw is called Tigerpaw once.


Now for the alert!

Warriors Power of Three Book Six: Sunrise is a book that (in my opinion) should not be read by children under 10. Also, it doesn't even have a remotely happy ending.

Jayce